For 2 weeks we have being making poster

Writing task

Today for music we got to watch a music video and when we had watched the music video we had two choose to write about the dog or the girl.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m7Bc3pLyij0&vl=en

It was this girls birthday and everyone was running around and screaming. After a few minutes then someone gave her cake and she was about to blow the candles out but someone else blew out her candles. She had a little tear in her eyes but then she got a yellow bow. Then her dad had a dog in his hands and he gave her the dog. She got happy.

She would get measured and she would measure her dog. Later when she got older she had PE class and they were doing soccer but the girls wouldn't  choose her so she just sat on the chair. After school she would always practice playing with the dog then she had photo day. They were just  going to take the photo but the camera man told her that she had to smile so she did but the other girls were laughing at her because she had braces.

A couple of months before Christmas she went to the lounge. She saw her dog on the floor. She didn know what was happening so they rushed the dog to the SPCA. The girl was waiting for her dog but the doctor couldn't do anything. The dogs paw went to on her hand. Then she was crying. The doctor took the dog and that was the last time she saw her dog.

Simple sentence

Today we were learning about simple sentence and how to use simple sentence

The music was loud.
The music was loud because there was party.
The music was loud because there was party at the house.
The music was loud because there was party at the house but they turn off the music


collusion-I lent how do to use simple sentence and how do them Thanks for reading.

Drama week 4

For this week we have been doing drama our group is called Boil we have 4 people in our group Tj,Josh,Cody,Saia our topic we have been given is Physical well being our message stay fit and stay healthy Cody going to make some food chorus is going to be fitness we have to make some puppet and when have been doing paper bags for our puppet.

Athletics day

Today it was athletic day every year were do athletic day I got drooped of school then I was waking to  my classroom.I just waited for the bell to ring when then I went in to the class room When will in the classroom we had to some actives when we have done  we got to play game.We went on the filed we got to play game we had to go in a circle and then someone in the middle the person in the middle at the ball.This game was opposite so if the person said catch you had to punch the ball if the person said that you had to punch the ball that means you would have to punch the ball.After few minutes we had to go back to the class we got our walk to J8 or J7 It was house meting for our  saying what to say we could there not any lunch and morning tea time so we ate there we had to our saying for our team a few minutes we had to walk to D block

When We Have a Reliever

Today with our Reliever I we were doing blogging and feedback to others school I comment to two blog's from others school.And I went to sit with my mates on the floor when I should,dent being setting with my mates on the floor when I should be seating on my table.When we have guest  in our class we still follow the rules the our teacher told not seating in the wrong place we still have to follow the rules even its not our teacher

basketball

Last year I joined a basketball team my goal to join a basketball team. I had to go to every practice there was I more fun than just setting down on the deck playing my Chromebook I was very excited to join the team.There were two teams there was blue team and a gold team I was in blue team every Friday.We played in Middleton Grange school how could we get there our school vans to transport our your

Yurtle the turtle

Yurtle the turtle is female breed of a Red eared turtle. Mr Mitchell told us to write a letter to St Bernadette's School. We had to persuasive the class to trade the turtle for the frogs. I gave facts about the frogs they were golden bells there was one female and one male.

Here is my letter to St Bernadette's School.

Hornby High school

180 Waterloo Road

Hornby 8042

October 15 2018

Mrs Mitchell

St Bernadette’s Primary

Hei Hei Road

Hornby 8042

Dear Mrs Mitchell

Our Classroom would like the turtle because we will return so you could have the frogs.The frogs are named (Yoda) boy and Belle If you are lucky Belle will lay eggs but its not like normal chicken egg.The frogs egg are much smaller than Normal chicken egg.Every Time the class is quite Yoda will make noise It sounds like a fart noise fact golden bell frogs eat spiders,water snails,cricket,Worms,Flies.

Yours sincerely Saia

Saia Hia

  

A strange thing happened on the way to school today

Our writing was about  A strange thing happened on the way to school today

Make up a story about something strange that happened on the way to school.

This is my draft

A strange thing happened on the way to school today

I was walking to school then felt the ground shaking I look behind myself than I saw a zombie arm coming out  of the ground. I ran has fast as I can I was trying to hide from the zombie’s there was abandoned vehicle I hid in the boot looking for something to protect myself all I found was old wet stick I had little peak at the window I see man running for his life he had gun In his hand.But I just noticed that it was not abandoned it was car I tried to escape I just made out but the guy couldn't drive and then hit truck the truck hit mostly all the zombies.But the big problem was that it was one of the truck that had gas on them I saw gas leaking I thourth in my mind that I going to EXPLODE I ran as far I could all the zombie’s walk to the truck the BLEW Up killing all the zombie’s.

This is my final

A strange thing happened on the way to school today

I was walking to school then I felt the ground shaking I look behind myself than I see a zombie arm coming out  of the ground. I ran has fast as I can I was trying to hide from the zombie’s there was abandoned vehicle I hid in the boot looking for something to protect myself all I found was old wet stick I had little peak at the window I see man running for his life he had gun In his hand.But I just noticed that it was not abandoned it was his car I tried to escape I just made out but the guy couldn't drive and then hit truck the truck hit mostly all the zombie’s.But the big problem was that it was one of the truck that had gas on them I saw gas LEAKING! I thought in my mind that It going to EXPLODE! I ran as far I could all the zombie’s were waking  to the truck then it BLEW UP! killing all the zombie’s.

My assessment

Assessment:	Self	Peer	Teacher
Ideas	4	4
Struct & Lang	3	3

My pet choice

Last week writing A pet of choice
 I choice a indoraptor
This was our instructors

• Write your draft in the Draft section of the table below, in the box by your name.
• Provide Feedback on your writing buddy’s draft writing in the Feedback section of his/her writing box.
• Read the feedback from your writing buddy.
• Copy your draft writing into your Final box and revise this based on the feedback you have received.
• Assess the final version of your own writing for ideas using the Writing Rubric.
• Peer-assess the final version of your writing buddy’s writing for ideas using the Writing Rubric.

 

This my feedback what I got

These are good ideas, Saia, but you haven’t used enough persuasive language. You could say what the benefits of having an indoraptor would be. For example, would it be a good guard dog? Also you were asked to write two paragraphs, not just one.

Can I have a indoraptor for my pet?

I want indoraptor because has  lots of commands also I will take care of it The indoraptor Dna is mix with a raptor, indominus rex   It is more powerful than a normal raptor,indominus rex.We would need enormous cage for the indoraptor.The Indoraptor is great guard because would be frightened  because it is a massive dinosaur.

This is my Final

Can I have a indoraptor for my pet?

I want indoraptor because has lots of commands also I will take care of it The indoraptor. Dna is mix with a raptor, indominus rex It is more powerful than a normal raptor,indominus rex.We would need enormous cage for the indoraptor.The Indoraptor is great guard because would be scared cause it is a massive dinosaur.

My Assessment

Assessment:	Self	Peer	Teacher
Ideas	4	4	3

I AM SAIA

I AM SAIA

I am someone who wants to play professional basketball.

I wonder if I will be basketball player.

I hear a ball bouncing across the court.

I see other players on the court.

I want to be in a professional basketball team.

I am someone who wants to play professional basketball.

I pretend to be in professional  basketball team

I feel the pressure when I am playing basketball

I touch the ball while I bouncing the ball

I worry that I wouldn’t be able to make it to  basketball team

I cry out of winning

I am someone who wants to be a basketball player

I understand if it is hard to get in a professional club

I say let’s go

I dream to join professional team

I try to get in professional team

I hope that I will be professional basketball player

I am Saia

-       Saia

rugby

The all Blacks Shaking the Wallabies after challenging game the all blacks standing strait shaking
the wallabies. They give eye contact to the players that they vs in a match when they fished the match
they lined up and say good game to the other team. Because they are respecting the players even they
loss or win they just play for fun.

Ice cream

Ice cream

I can just taste goody goody gum drops there were lollies in the cream when you eat the lollies the were
cold  but when you eat the lollies it gets chewing and it is like bubblegum. But with ice cream.
In it there were there different colours of lollies there was red,green,orange,purple, the ice cream look like
mint ice cream but it not mint ice cream it just look like mint ice cream.

I just tasted some delicious creamy ice cream it tasted like it was from Mr whippy melted creamy
milkshake that has no ice cream just cream in it but still can tasted the ice cream when I put in my mouth
I just got brain freeze in my head it's like have ice in my brain.

thank you letter

To Pta

Thank you for helping us we are great full we have you here you have help us alot we like when you help us at olympic day.

From saia

How to make coconut milk

How to make coconut milk

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• You  need blend  on high for several minutes until thick and get creamy.
• Pour through a mesh colander first to get most of the
• coconut out and then squeeze through a towel or several
• thickness of cheesecloth to get remaining pieces of coconut.

my birthday

I hear a noise what do you think it is the noise. It's my birthday on Sunday I just turn 10 I invited Coby, Cody, Chris, Brad, and Sione, when they came to the birthday I got ready I had to get  the ice. Then I got the fizzy drinks my mum made light saber out of pool nodes she put sticky tape on the light saber. The games were pie face wet head there was a water slide after that was dad cooking on the barbecue.Dad was cooking meat chicken burgers after that my dad got the water slide. We got our toggles on for the water slide Cody was playing wet head after that Coby went to the water slide.Then we had a race on the water slide Coby won the race I was so close to win the race but I had to go faster.

my holidays

Have you played  a xbox one before? I played with my friends on xbox one using the internet. When I joined the party they were frustrated because of the lag.   It was on Saturday and I played for two hours. After that my hands got sore so I took a break. I got a big drink of water and made me a ham with cheese sandwich then I went back on the xbox one. My xbox one was as hot as a fireplace. I was playing Need for Speed Pursuit with my friends. We raced against each other, I was second in the race. After that my dad had a try by himself. He couldn’t even move so I helped him but then he gave up. There were six people in the race, I kept crashing into the other cars. I am allowed to play when I have done my homework. Mostly I play for one hour because I get bored but I can’t play everyday.  When  I turn my xbox one off  I just play with my sister, Alexia or I rush out to the trampoline.