Text Tittle-When a Mini Isn't Mini enough
Text type-Cars
Text creator-Damien O'Carroll
Critical Literacy Question -Why are we/you reading this text? I am reading this text because it looks really interesting to read
When a Mini Isn't enough The first-ever Min is a legend and Icon for some people four seats were too big for them. One of these Mini for auction got sold for $10,000. This Mini is really Incoinc you would never see this Mini on the road every day. There is one problem with this Mini is how safe it is on the road nowadays there are way bigger cars on the road if this car got into an accident this car would be crushed it also depends how fast also is going. This Mini remedies me of cartoon or comic books
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Hello Saia, I like how you added not only the price of an auction for the Mini but also added a description of the first ever Mini and how it's an icon for some people. Do you know how long ago this type of car was popular amongst society?
ReplyDeleteMaybe next time you could work on your grammar because some of the words that you pronounced in this text isn't spelt correctly!, you could also be giving more valuable details to hook the reader in, like the proper name of the Mini or the evolution towards the car today.
These cars look extraordinary and look iconic but I'm not sure if I would personally own one because of the small size. The image that you provided in this text relates positively towards the informational text so well done!.
-Kaedun :)
Hi Saia
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading about this kind of car.
Positive - I like how you mentioned they got sold for auction for a very expensive price
Thoughtful - I like how you also stated that how this Mini size can also affect its safety on roads
Helpful - Next time just double check your spelling and punctuation
but this was really interesting to read and I learnt something new. Good Job!
Hello Saia, I really liked reading your blog post about 'When a Mini isn't Mini Enough' I liked how you added a decent amount of information talking about this car. And how it might handle on the roads if it gets driven on the highway or just on normal roads I have liked how you added how much money it went for at the auction. This vehicle looks like a good car to drive in for regular basses but it does depend on how it would. Handle on the road if it got in a crash next time can you check over your writing that you did there is a wee spelling mistake. Where you were talking about how it reminds you of a cartoon or a comic book but other than that good job on your blog post I enjoyed reading it.
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