I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Saia. This is quite hard to read and there are a few spelling mistakes. I could only read the first few sentences and they they didn't make much sense. The stuff that I could read was good and the presentation is good. Good Work
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Hi Saia. This is quite hard to read and there are a few spelling mistakes. I could only read the first few sentences and they they didn't make much sense. The stuff that I could read was good and the presentation is good. Good Work
ReplyDeleteThanks Cody for the feedback I have made it readable and fix everything thanks for the feedback
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