Monday 27 September 2021
Text title- Three brothers in can seen racing with others before fatal Christchurch crash
Text creator-Nadine Porter
Text type-Article
Critical literacy question What is the Purpose of this text -What could happen if you are not doing the speed limit and have a low risk of surviving and the people that died on Saturday
On Saturday night around 7:30 pm, Mark Nicholl Jn and Will Clark sadly died in a crash on Halswell Junction Rd near the intersection of Shands rd in Canterbury. Mark Nicholl Jnr and Will Clark were seen by some witnesses racing other vehicles before the accident happen. Mark Nicholl Jnr collided with an Isuzu Ute as the one in the photo. Killing him and one of his passengers Will Clark the passengers was Mark Nicholl brothers. Shana Nicholl sustained critical injury and remains in a coma Jayden Nicholl was seriously injured. The victims that were in the Ute just had a moderate injury.
Hey Saia, I like your blog-post its very eventful.
ReplyDeletePositive ~ I like how you have found some good information about this scene, pretty tragic the way that they have one out but they're soldiers, you have some good pointers in their, like you should go to speed limit and not to go over.
Thoughtful ~ I feel for the brothers of Mark Jn, you know being in the accident and still being able to be here themselves, but i also feel for the family of Will Clark, Tragic!.
Helpful ~ I would think that you would add a tad of more information, you already have alot but maybe a little more of what happened and more infortmation.
But other than that you done a very awesome job keep uhp the good work!
Levi