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Monday, April 8, 2019

Writing task

Today for music we got to watch a music video and when we had watched the music video we had two choose to write about the dog or the girl.


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m7Bc3pLyij0&vl=en

It was this girls birthday and everyone was running around and screaming. After a few minutes then someone gave her cake and she was about to blow the candles out but someone else blew out her candles. She had a little tear in her eyes but then she got a yellow bow. Then her dad had a dog in his hands and he gave her the dog. She got happy.

She would get measured and she would measure her dog. Later when she got older she had PE class and they were doing soccer but the girls wouldn't  choose her so she just sat on the chair. After school she would always practice playing with the dog then she had photo day. They were just  going to take the photo but the camera man told her that she had to smile so she did but the other girls were laughing at her because she had braces.

A couple of months before Christmas she went to the lounge. She saw her dog on the floor. She didn know what was happening so they rushed the dog to the SPCA. The girl was waiting for her dog but the doctor couldn't do anything. The dogs paw went to on her hand. Then she was crying. The doctor took the dog and that was the last time she saw her dog.



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