Here is my letter to St Bernadette's School.
Hornby High school
180 Waterloo Road
Hornby 8042
October 15 2018
Mrs Mitchell
St Bernadette’s Primary
Hei Hei Road
Hornby 8042
Dear Mrs Mitchell
Our Classroom would like the turtle because we will return so you could have the frogs.The frogs are named (Yoda) boy and Belle If you are lucky Belle will lay eggs but its not like normal chicken egg.The frogs egg are much smaller than Normal chicken egg.Every Time the class is quite Yoda will make noise It sounds like a fart noise fact golden bell frogs eat spiders,water snails,cricket,Worms,Flies.
Yours sincerely Saia
Saia Hia
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ReplyDeleteAwesome job Saia, the letter was very well wrote and it was persuasive. Next time add more information about urtle if you are writing about her again. Overall awesome job.
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ReplyDeleteGood job on the letter Saia. It was well wrote and made a lot of sense.
Next time add a little bit more facts, like whats her age, what she eats and where natural habitat is. anyway good job Saia keep up the good work.