I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
I wonder if you could take another look at your introduction, it doesn't really explain what the task you are sharing with us is and your sentence is a little bit unclear. I wonder what you could change or add to improve?
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
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ReplyDeleteI wonder if you could take another look at your introduction, it doesn't really explain what the task you are sharing with us is and your sentence is a little bit unclear. I wonder what you could change or add to improve?
- Miss Birtch