I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Saia👋 I like how you have most of the slides done. Also I like how you have layed out the slide. But there are a couple of things that need to be improved. The first thing is your missing your 1900. The second thing is your missing some info on the songs. Apart from those two things you have produced a really good slide.
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Hi Saia👋 I like how you have most of the slides done. Also I like how you have layed out the slide. But there are a couple of things that need to be improved. The first thing is your missing your 1900. The second thing is your missing some info on the songs. Apart from those two things you have produced a really good slide.
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