I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wednesday, November 20, 2019
Deadly Island
On a deadly Island this Island was very dangerous nobody could go to the Island the government could only go to the Island it was owned by them.Some people wanted to know what was the Island and why was it deadly the hard thing to get there. They have install camera there was only one plan to the Island we would have to use boat we would have to find a hacker to take the camera's out. We were all ready to go we got closer to the Island the hacker took all the camera's. They went all into the Island there was one bad thing there snakes,spiders they quickie ran away form the deadly one of them got bitten by snake. He staring blending very heavy the bad thing was that it venom snake they dragged him into the boat sadly he died of the venom it too strong for humans. They shared to social media they told everyone to not go to the Island it was very dangerous. They told what was on Island and how someone died on the Island mostly everyone changed there mind of going to the Island.
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